Part Seven: Page 16

December 18th, 2009, 12:34 pm
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sentiashinou December 18th, 2009, 12:44 pm
Rar. I have been seeing this particular page in my head for probably the last year or so, so it's no wonder it ended up turning out completely different than what I was expecting. xD I think this is the second to last page in the chapter, but depending on how the next page looks I might add one more after that.

Also... that panel of Kei, everything that's black is actually ink. Because I totally forgot that I usually fill in that stuff with black in photoshop. Hurr.

I just have one final left, in a little under two hours. In statics, which should be enough of a challenge on the final exam, I suppose. Wish me luck, guys. :3

@webcomiclover: I know right xD Sentia is turning out clumsier than I meant her to. SHE'S LIKE ME.

@sarall: Hrm.. You are definitely right that adding backgrounds would up the quality of the comic, but I'm not sure I agree with you that their absence is anything new xD;; Didn't let that stop me from trying to take your advice on this page though.

@NovemberSaint: Is this enough Kei for ya? ;3

@Theorah: I definitely see what you mean. I will try to be better, though I hope the last page didn't ruin the flow for this chapter D; And I'm sure I'll have more time and energy to pay attention to it once I'm on break, haha.
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sarall December 18th, 2009, 2:10 pm
I really love that fifth panel. The black cross-hatch kinda stuff looks great, and so does Kei! X3
Theorah December 19th, 2009, 4:00 pm
woah close shave indeed! 0_0
I dont think it ruined the flow, its only noticible if your putting on art-critic glasses XD I'm the same though, my art has been crappy/unemotional cos of busy uni work! I think the fourth panel is a wonderful example of your usual spontaneus/flowing artwork, nice job =3
NovemberSaint December 19th, 2009, 6:11 pm
There's no such thing as enough Kei :D
Really, the fifth panel is beeaauutiful. Too bad he couldn't grab Lindina, though. Darn that big hole in the middle of the woods, anyway!
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I'm excited for the next one:)