Part Three: Page 10

March 30th, 2008, 12:00 am
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sentiashinou March 27th, 2008, 2:35 pm
Uh oh. This cannot be a good sign. xD People who haven't seen the next part, feel free to guess what's going to happen. It will be fun. x3 Well, fun for you to guess, I mean. What happens to Lindina won't necessarily be fun. xD

I think I'm coming to terms with dark scenes... at least they don't look so empty like the last few pages. xAx Sorry about that. This chapter, like the last one, will have the last few pages in a dark setting. On a somewhat related note, wtf is in the water to make it that dark?? @.@;; Ewwwwwww.
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amiko_16 March 30th, 2008, 1:50 am
(god I hope not lol)
Toasted Jelly March 30th, 2008, 8:12 am


sarall March 30th, 2008, 4:26 pm
I love the angry Sentia face... the one after the "PLIP" panel. :3 "Stupid sorceress... BIRDS CAN'T SWIM."

I think maybe you should've had Lindina with one leg folded under her, like she was kicking. That way we could've seen that she was struggling (or panicking). Not that it doesn't look good as is, just for future reference. *is shot*
KittyScythe April 7th, 2008, 7:27 pm
yay she's drowning...i mean...>>....<<...say what?